13 years ago
Wed Aug 27 2014, 08:49pmElspeth
( i just made this up randomly... if you think it sucks, i already know lol)
I was in a weird city which seemed like it was on another planet or in the future. I could see cars flying with different colour glowing lights underneath them, and they were making a weird sound as if they were running on air rather than gas, which they probably were because the air smelled so clean and fresh.
The buildings weren't really tall, they were small, hinny and domb like, they looked like they were covered in glass tiles.
Then when i turned a cornerthere was one huge block full of small gardens. There were lots of colours, green, blue, yellow, orange, red baisically all the colours of the rainbow, and the air was filled with the scent of roses mixed with that grape flavoured fizzy drinks that you can get.
There were also tree's around the gardens and they had twinkling lights hung from one tree to the other. The lights were multi coloured like fairy lights.
I walked offf and around another corner and I could smell something like candy and bread. Then I saw that a young beautiful girl with firey hair and small gold eyes was selling candy sandwhiches for $2:50. It looked so weird but I had to try it.
Once I bought the "Candy Explosion" which is what it was called, I took a small bite and it tasted like cotton candy covoured in chocolate, it was like a cotten candy and chocolate cake, and it was delicious.
Then i heard a "boom" and I looked up and saw an explosion of fire works going off in all colours and all directions in the starlit night sky.
There you have it..... i was bored and i was browsing and found this page and made something up :roll:
13 years ago
Sat Mar 19 2011, 06:41pm
It definitely doesn't suck! It sounds really good Selenia! :D You've got great description in there. Perhaps you'd like to continue it or post other writing pieces in a thread in Writersmerge? I'm sure others apart from myself would be interested to see this develop into a story.
[Edit: Unless, of course, I've misinterpreted the purpose of the story den.]
Thats brilliant. I agree with Meza, u should put this story in a writersmerge thread or write another story in a writersmerge thread. Then if you can, post the thread's name over here so we can read the story.
I'd give it a thumbs up! and for something you were writing when you were bored it's a really decent story ^^;