The major thing with the hands is that the girls hand is probabbly a bit too small, but apart from that it looks quite nice Smuff :) I especially love the pose between the two.
Mystic Ward
14 years ago
Mystic Ward
Twentyfamilies Gypsy
I like it Smuff but i think the girls arm is out of proportion. It needs to be a little bigger all over, not just the hand. Just my opinion of course.
14 years ago
Wed May 26 2010, 04:52pm
Oooh, very nice!! I too particularly love her hair.
I'll join in with the constructive criticism that I think her arm, especially from the elbow down, needs to be bigger. Don't you hate scale sometimes? It drives me insane in my Animal subject where we're constantly drawing yabbies and pigeon skeletons and the like, and their head ends up being twice the size of their claw or something.
I also think their mouths could do with a tiny bit more definition. Not a massive black smile or something, it's just I can see that there's something there but it's not showing up very well so when I just glance at it it's like they don't have mouths. Her especially. It could just be how it's scanned though...
But yeah, I really like it!
EDIT: Oh, thought of something else. You said you struggled with their hands, I think the problem with his hand is it's cupping outwards too much. It's like he's cupping it over something that juts out, like it it was over a bent knee, but it's actually on the small of her back. It's not a big issue, and I certainly wouldn't be bothered fixing it, but if you're feeling particularly in to it you could try reducing the angle a bit so his hand is a bit more flat. That said, I really like the definition of his fingers.
Boy, Beth. I still can't believe how awesome it is. Just you wait til my owl's done... :|
Oh wow, Beth, it's gorgeous. I love how it's eyes have such a depth to them!
Wooah, Beth! That's amazing! The detail and likeness of the fur is just incredible!! :D
Beth - Oh. My. Lud. 8-| That looks more like a photograph than a drawing - it's so perfect! 8-| I'm in complete awe of you right now. The shading is so detailed, it makes the tiger actually look alive! It must have taken ages to do. It looks like it was drawn by a professional.
Anyway, it's really fantastic.
That is amazing. Absolutely loving the eyes!! How long did it take you?
THANK YOU, everyone. I really appreciate comments and was a bit nervous at first. It took me AGES to finish, like eight weeks! I spent ages trying to get the fur right and i think i finally got it. The eyes are realllly hard because i can get one right but it is hard to get the other one correctly in proportion.
OML! :O Your tiger looks amazing Beth! I agree with Avialle, it looks so realistic. Gah, it must have been a pain to get it all that detailed. The eyes really are quite something. I love it. :D
SQUEEEEEEEE!!!! Gui!!! (L) (L)
*cough* ...'Tis bishie goodness, Hell. ~:|
Sorry,, haven't posted here for ages! Well Hell; Spawn of Satan (is there a way to simplify your name?) I really like the colours you have chosen and especially the darker/other one.
Sorry i don't know much about manga or anime but that is super good, i couldn't do it (computers isn't my thing!)
Love the eyes!! :)
WOWS!
Beth - 8-| I agree with Tonks and Avialle it looks so life like! At first glance I thought they were photos taken in sepia and black and white!
Hell - That's awesome! Like beth I don't know much about manga but I think that's FABULOUS! I also like the darker version better.:D
That's awesome, dude! I love it!
Nice work Dylan, it looks great! Love your choice of colours and especially the rose!
Not to criticize or anything but i think that one of the leaf things in the reflection is reflecting the wrong way. I don't maybe just recheck it, I'm probably wrong!
hmmm i dont see what you mean sorry plus the reflection is worked out using raytrace algorithms and other things i dont understand
opps, probably just my brain muddling info up. sorry
I really like it Dylan. :D
14 years ago
Sun Aug 29 2010, 03:23pm
Ewwwwwwww, why him?! :-X But it is the most amazing lino print I've ever seen (L)
I think the background looks good as it is, but...I dunno. ~:| I guess a little more contrast wouldn't hurt :) *shrugs*
It is majorly AWESOME, Tonky. @_@
~:| We had to do it on something that represents today's society. Plus my art teacher wouldn't let me do Doctor Who.
The background still needs a lot of work, I think there's a sea suppose to go in behind him ... I haven't decided yet.
which doc who? the latest one? hes awesome
but yeah im shore you could have picked a better sublect that represents society
but other then that this is compleatly amazing
