Mystic Guilden
17 years ago
Sat Mar 03 2007, 10:06pm
Mystic Guilden
Mage
True Hurt
You look sad,
And cry your crocodile tears,
But you are not sorry,
Don't tell me you are.
Keep walking,
Don't console my sorrow,
My hurt is true pain,
Yours is a lie.
Honour your feelings,
I know the truth,
You feel nothing,
While I mourn.
Your work is beautiful, soft and demanding of the readers attention. The first piece was the best, in my opinion. And the last piece i'm guessing was written while you were greiving at your fullest, it is volatile and aggressive but beautiful unto itself. I'm not a big poetry fan but i read all of yours so thats a big indicator of their worth. Don't stop writing......
Aprill xxxx
Mystic Guilden
17 years ago
Mon Jan 15 2007, 04:38pm
Mystic Guilden
Mage
Thanks Aprill
It's really is nice to know that a reader can take someting away from my writing, even when it spills over the page in a time of inner turmoil.
I really appreaciate you reading
Cheers
Ari
Mystic Guilden
17 years ago
Mystic Guilden
Mage
Tears in Darkness
Sorrow fills my heart to its brim,
Spilling over the soft edges,
It spreads though my body like poison,
Blocking my energy flow with ease.
I sink into lethargy,
Sleeping through the sunshine,
Waining with the golden dawn,
Choking on air think with hurt.
Shrouded in nights darkness,
Tears push at my eyes,
And in its gentle caressing hand,
I cry the poison from myself in salty rivers.
Mystic Ward
17 years ago
Mystic Ward
Twentyfamilies Gypsy
beautiful Ari. you turn your sorrow into healing with gentle phrases. I hope your writing will be a great comfort to you at this time.
Mystic Guilden
17 years ago
Wed Jan 17 2007, 09:57pm
Mystic Guilden
Mage
Untitled
I dont want my weary eyes to close,
bringing an end to the day,
then i have to let you go,
and that i cannot face.
My heart aches to hold you here,
it aches more to let you go,
so here you will stay,
and i will live in denial.
I dont want my weary eyes to close,
and wake tomorrow to reality,
that you will be gone from here,
and i will feel alone.
My heart aches hold you here,
and more to know the truth,
that one day i will wake,
and not be sad for you.
Mystic Guildmistress
17 years ago
Mystic Guildmistress
Mage
Your poems are so beautiful Ari... I hope they help you to express your feelings right now... They're so beautiful... I wish I could express myself like that.
Mystic Guilden
17 years ago
Mystic Guilden
Mage
Thanks Elspethinnle.
I just write what comes.....currently i am writing my emotions out and it is helping because i can identify exactly what i am feeling and why.
I'm glad you like my poems, it really does mean a lot to know people read, understand and appreciate your work.
Cheers
Ari
Very nice Ari - beautifully real poems! I can feel the hurt and grief through your words.
I hope the writing helps too!
MK
I'm still new around here so I hope you don't mind my commenting on your work, but it was so beautiful I had to! I love the rhythm of what you write: for me, truly good poetry is the kind that flows and has, if you'll excuse the no doubt cliche description, a heartbeat. There's also a real poignancy there: you can write about grief and sorrow without turning it into angst. Your writing is lovely.
Mystic Guilden
17 years ago
Mystic Guilden
Mage
I welcome any commentry, so dont be worried about posting here.
Thank you for you kind words. I am overwhelmed by how many people appreciate my work...its never occured to me before that its worth reading.
I would like to say though, that it was Writersmerge and reading others work that inspired me to write again.
Cheers
Ari
Mystic Ward
17 years ago
Mystic Ward
Twentyfamilies Gypsy
Keep them coming Ari. your peotry is truely beautiful
Mystic Guilden
17 years ago
Mystic Guilden
Mage
Moving on...
The sun lights up the world,
On this summers day,
and i sit in wonderment,
Of my own heart.
Once my heart was broken,
Shattered like clear glass,
And though its still in pieces,
It does not seem to ache.
So I enjoy the sunlight,
And pray for the rain,
And while i am still sad for you,
I do not feel the pain.
Mystic Ward
17 years ago
Mystic Ward
Twentyfamilies Gypsy
you rock Ari.....such feeling is in your writing. cheers
Mystic Guilden
17 years ago
Mystic Guilden
Mage
Time
Time is an illusion,
Playing with my mind,
Telling me to chatch up,
When I fall behind.
The constant ticking of the hand,
Moving over the clock face,
Always feeling late for life,
Loosing the never ending race.
Mystic Guilden
17 years ago
Mystic Guilden
Mage
My Life
My life is...
Shedding outer layers,
That died long ago,
Showing off the clean soul underneath.
My life is....
Crying out in pain,
Of fear and of loss,
That recent events cannot change.
My life is....
Looking to the future,
While living in the past,
Unsure of which road to take.
My life is....
Ending in the middle,
Beginning at the end,
Finishing the loop only to start again.
Mystic Guilden
17 years ago
Mystic Guilden
Mage
Untitled
The water laps against the rocks,
caressing the grains in crystalised liquid.
Slowly the rock gives into its charms,
and wears away to nothing.
Mystic Ward
17 years ago
Mystic Ward
Twentyfamilies Gypsy
Ari, I think My Life is just beautiful and one of the best poems you have posted here.
I love the element of healing, hope and acceptance in Moving On. The way it seems to acknowledge grief but also joy. I also love Untitled - short but effective.
Mystic Guilden
17 years ago
Mystic Guilden
Mage
Darkness
I want to die in the dark,
Where no one will hear my cries,
Where no one will reveal my lies,
Reaching out to all and nothing,
Falling for eternity.
Mystic Guilden
17 years ago
Mystic Guilden
Mage
Desolation
What is this black hole?
Sucking me into its murky depths,
Chewing up my insides,
Making me an empty shell,
A hollow echo of what once was.
What is this road I see?
Twisting like a venomous snake,
Biting into my weary feet,
Making me stumble and fall,
Leading me to another dead end.
Mystic Guilden
17 years ago
Mystic Guilden
Mage
Flame of Fury
My thoughts plague me,
Like a demon in my mind,
They whisper of secrets,
Tormented, twisted lies.
My words come from the void,
Skewed and full of malice,
Spitting liquid fire,
I drown in the tongues of flame.
Mystic Ward
17 years ago
Mystic Ward
Twentyfamilies Gypsy
Powerful stuff Ari...dark and meaningful. keep em coming
Mystic Guilden
17 years ago
Tue Apr 24 2007, 10:53am
Mystic Guilden
Mage
Dreaming
I dream a dream so real,
It confuses me to wake,
Feeling the sunshine warming up my face.
Did I wake into a dream,
Sleeping through reality,
Or am i lost to both the worlds i know?
Mystic Guilden
17 years ago
Mystic Guilden
Mage
Black of life
Golden flecks light the sky,
Paling the silver stars.
Flame leaps and crawls,
Chewing, biting, consuming.
Green turns to hollow black,
The colour of death.
Patiently the earth waits,
Singing its death song.
And from the black hollow,
Deaths very grasp.
Vivid green life emerges.
Reaching for the silver stars,
Shining uninhibited.