Hi Kaylan - that's a nasty story! And very interesting. Just in the interests of our younger members, I'm taking the liberty of moving the link over to Prodders for you :). Anyway, since you want to enter it in AHWA's competition and since they want only unpublished stories, probably best if you don't have it publicly available (most of these mags consider sticking a story up in a public place as publication). Prodders is safer for it!