It's a very promising start, good Mihali. I enjoyed it.
Quite good! It was well written, and it really felt like it could have been part of the book [img]http://s4.images.proboards.com/smiley.gif" alt=":)" border="0"/> Short and to the point [img]http://s4.images.proboards.com/tongue.gif" alt=":P" border="0"/>
Thank you for your comments, both of you! Once ff.net allows me access to the login screen I should be able to fix errors. *lamants* I can read and re-read and re-write, and I'm reasonable at editing anything that isn't mine, but with stuff <i>I</i> write, there's always a typo or general glitch that slips by. Always.
The first full chapter should be up tomorrow.
