Ha ha :).
Excellent, Larana. I've enjoyed what I've read so far; I'll have a look at the extra bits later today.
Best of luck.
I don't think any good can come of Georgia mixing work and pleasure like this :P. Particularly not with this Adrian character. He seems dodgy to me :nods:. He's probably the one that's going to get her killed. In fact, I bet he and Chavez are cousins!
I'm very intrigued about this afterlife world of yours. It seems that anything is possible. It also seems like Chavez is the only one able to do any manipulating. Wonder if Georgia will be able to take a bit more control as she works there longer?
This is a really interesting story, Larana! Your psych background makes everything sound very convincing :).
I am writing some later chapters now as I got stuck with filling the middle and knew where I wanted the end to go.
Mystic Ward
10 years ago
Mystic Ward
Twentyfamilies Gypsy
at least ;D you are writing.
YAY! I'm not the only writer who disobey chronology!! Writing things out of order for the win! [act]flails arms about[/act]
Mystic Guilden
10 years ago
Mystic Guilden
Mage
What is chronology? I do not know this word.....
I've made a start with reading your story and have enjoyed it so far. I hope to go back and read on soon and put the start of the story into some context :)
Chronology is the science of arranging things in time. In this context it means writing things outside of the ordered sequence of events :)
I know there has been blog words but I'm going to prod you anyway :)
