I've gotten rid of the arrow, and I think it looks better, and I've added a few ominous clouds in the sky now, though I'm not entirely sure what else I can do.
~Link~I'm about to start working on my second entry, although I'm not entirely sure I'll be able to get it finished in time to enter it, but I'm enjoying experimenting with Gimp :D
Edit: I decided that I'd do Darkbane next, and I'm okay with it, though I can't think of anything that would improve. I've included the Firstmade and Shenavyre for this one.
~Link~ Edit: And Darksong with Ember and one of the Alyda scrolls:
~Link~Let me know what you think and post any tips please :)
Edit: My fourth edit today :P I found the arrow I used before, and I've put it into Darkfall, though I don't think it works as well as the others.
~Link~ I think my Darksong cover is probably my favourite, though I am pretty pleased with the way I managed to clone the Firstmade. ;D