19 years ago
Sat Nov 03 2007, 07:37pm
sorry Flit
All Poems are copywrited by
KaylanR ©
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the night falls as if slain by the sun, entwined are we.
the salvation for which you lust
flares once, then dies,
smothered by a velvet ebon nothingness.
all hope must fail.
your passion throbs no more.
how could you tear us asunder?
shadows surround us, crying,
we have lost our way.
Let me love you
Let me drain
myself in you.
Let me feel
your colours.
Let me listen
to the sound of your voice
as it whispers
gently
into my ear.
Let me hold
your hand.
Let me taste
your tears.
Let me paint
your smile
as you look
into
my eyes.
Let me stroke
your neck.
Softly,
in the wind.
Let me stroke
your hair
as it moves gently
into the wind.
Let me love you
as you love me
Romanticly,
beautifully.
Captivising,
your face is
as I cup it in my hands.
It falls, gracefully
into the night.
I like that line
'the night falls as if slain by the sun.'
very descriptive! and evocative
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Thanks rigel!! I appreciate it!
I wish
It was a sad day
when you said goodbye.
I wish I had an angel
to watch over you when you died.
I wish that I could pray
that every single day I cried
was all but a single lie.
I wish I couldn't cry.
I wont tell you my inner feelings
I wont tell you how I feel inside.
I wish I could stretch my arms and fly
fly away into the night.
Oh bare grace misery
I'm just a child with a large hole in my heart.
Wish I could relive the memories
from the end to the start.
It was a sad day
when you said goodbye.
I wish I had an angel
to watch over you when you died.
To watch when you were alone.
To watch when you were asleep;
to also watch when I pray in my dreams
that your heart I'll forever keep.
yeah i agree with rigel with that "as if slain by the sun" part. So original!
Thankyou. And I always prefered night rather than day. So romantic!
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Dark nails
pinned in my heart,
how do you feel strapped into me.
Imperfcetly
so dark and detesded,
how does the sun feel towards you?
Entwined, collaged into the darkness,
meshed within the folds and threads of the pain.
How could I?
I open.......
the blinds,
and I see......
the light.
I hold onto.....
my hands,
as the wind blows through my hair.
How could I forget who I am?
How could I not see.
That the only perfect image in the miror is me.
I create......
a sanctuary,
for my tears.....
to hold.
I touch....
the lips,
of the one.....
I love.
How could I forget who I am?
How could I not see.
That the only perfect image in the miror is me.
How could I not hold,
the memory inside of you?
The only one I love is you.....but you don't seem to want me...
How could I forget who I am?
How could I not see.
That the only perfect image in the miror is me.
I am a feary
I am a faery
though my wings ache and break.
I struggle on through the blinding dreams;
my heart it does break.
Creations fly
through my dreams that lead to teh sky.
The light calls my in
rerling me through kith and kin.
I lack what I desire
through wind and through fire.
My wonderous dust holds sweet red lust,
my winds they are what you desire.
I am a faery
though my wings ache and break.
I fight the demons of my dreams;
the wind summoning my wake.
"My wonderous dust holds sweet red lust,
my winds they are what you desire."
i love that line! some parts of ur poems are sooo cool and deep and stuff [img]http://s4.images.proboards.com/smiley.gif" alt=":)" border="0"/>
i just found that "i am a faery" one a lil hard to understand in some parts tho, but its great anyways [img]http://s4.images.proboards.com/smiley.gif" alt=":)" border="0"/>
Ow, thankyou ryneisha.
And my poems sometimes don't make sense. But I don't really care.
Okay, another one.
Master of me,
You are my master
I'm your apprentice
we are wariors,
disciples.
I'm your lover,
dersire.
In me,
your my flower.
Ohhh.........loving one
Ohhh..........sword in stone.
I am a fighter
over water
I am a creater
of masters.
I'm your enemy,
desire.
Through me,
you seek my flower.
Ohhh.........Usurper
Ohhh.........lord of love.
I'm a dreamy eyed child without a hope
lost in the memories of my last home
dark maidens care for me now.
I swim in the waters of the deep
the mermaids play with my feet
they love me more than I know.
You are my master
I'm your apprentice
we are wariors,
disciples.
I'm your lover,
dersire.
In me,
your my flower.
Untitled.
Sweet boy come in
my love for you has never changed.
There's no such sin
that can make me love you any less.
My oh sweet priest
has said he'd pray us to heaven.
Where our lust will swim,
through lies, deciet and torture.
Break......the folds apart.
Untie.......the ropes of my heart.
Release.......the bird in my soul,
so together we'll let the future unfold.
Romantic scent
on the tip of my tongue.
My ashamed lies,
released, tortured to madness.
So sweet of you,
to let me fight all your fears away.
I'm so in love,
with you.......oh I'm not ashamed.
Break......the folds apart.
Untie.......the ropes of my heart.
Release.......the bird in my soul,
so together we'll let the future unfold.
And sing......the bird from our hearts.
Let go.......the fear I could not bear.
For you, my love I'll do anything.
Your my everything......Romantacide's just around the bend.
"My oh sweet priest
has said he'd pray us to heaven.
Where our lust will swim,
through lies, deciet and torture."
Ermm i dont get the whole being in yet swimming in lust... and why would there be lies, deceit and torture?
"My oh sweet priest
has said he'd pray us to heaven.
Where our lust will swim,
through lies, deciet and torture."
Ryneisha, swimming in lust means they love each other very much. And the lies, deciet and torture are the bends in their relashionship.
oh ok... just thought maybe they wouldn't have those problems if they were in heaven but u probably meant like a metaphorical heaven mibad [img]http://s4.images.proboards.com/smiley.gif" alt=":)" border="0"/>
I did mean metaphorical, but I'm glad that you brought up the fact that you didn't understand. I like answering peoples queeries about my poems!! [img]http://s4.images.proboards.com/grin.gif" alt=";D" border="0"/>
Questions of love.
''Yes, but how were we supposed to know?''
I asked my love so long ago.
His reply didn't mean a thing,
he left me thinking of him.........
''I can't help you, dear, I'm too old now''
I asked my father of my love.
I was so torn in my small heart then,
but my father didn't understand......
Hold.....my hand.
My love for you.....I should hope you undertsand.
I trust you'll.......stand in my stead.
When I'm obsessed by the evil, that's eating me inside.
''Trust me now love, you'll understand,
just nurse my love and hold my hand.''
I can't believe you said those things,
those biiter lies tore our love apart........
Hold.....my hand.
My love for you.....I should hope you undertsand.
I trust you'll.......stand in my stead.
When I'm obsessed by the evil, that's eating me inside.
Just whisper.....my name.
I'll shall save you.......from the frightning rain.
Just hold, my hand.
And then, then you'll understand.
Small little girl
Tears shed,
feelings of dread.
All cry for small little girl.
Lost in her world,
small and afraid.
Unsure of the world that lay before her.
Where is the laughter?
Where is the joy?
The hope can't begin
if all glory is gone.
Who is the singer
of all dark and mist?
Who is lost in peace
of the small little girl?
Lost in her own world
small and afraid,
Covering her face from the world.
Feelings of distraught,
feeling the rain,
battering down on her small withering heart.
Too afraid to go on,
too afraid to sing the song.
Too afraid to comfort the world
which left her behind.
Where is the sun?
Where is the rain?
Who screams out rage
from the deep dark within?
Lost in her own world,
small and afraid.
Unsure of the world that lay before her.
no offence i love ur poems but all the dot-dot-dots are kinda wreck the rhythm in my opinion
It's like a pause
And this;
those biiter lies tore our love apart........
is a like a stretch. Like aparrrrrrrttttt.
But if it wrecks the rythm, then I wont do it again. [img]http://s4.images.proboards.com/wink.gif" alt=";)" border="0"/>
Cinnamon bed
an appetite for your love.
The oh-sweet smell
delivers my love into your heart.
A hungry love
like a cinnamons a treat.
For you to eat,
while you devour into my love.
Oh love's a gift,
givin to you by your sweetheart.
A wild thing,
lost in the sheets of your desire.
Cinnamon bed
an appetite for your love.
The oh-sweet smell
delivers my love into your heart.
When it is done,
the feeling will diminish all the fright,
Of deepest darks.
It's a feeling I wont cope with.
Cinnamon bed
an appetite for your love.
The oh-sweet smell
delivers my love into your heart.
Oh my love's a gift for you,
a wild thing brought out of the blue.
If it is ever ended,
then I will die......for you.
It's the crappiest thing I've ever written, but hey - I don't really care. [img]http://s4.images.proboards.com/wink.gif" alt=";)" border="0"/>
Small little girl.
Tears shed,
feelings of dread
All cry for the small little girl.
Lost in her own world,
small and afraid.
Unsure of the would that lay before her.
Where is the laughter?
Where is the joy?
Thehope can't began
if all glory is gone.
Who is the singer
of all dark and mist?
Who lost the peace.
of the small little girl?
Lost in her own world,
small and afraid.
Covering her face from the world.
Feeling distraught,
feeling the rain,
battering down on her small withering heart.
Too afraid to go on,
too afrad to sing the song,
too afarid to confront the world
which left her behind.
Where is the sun?
Who is the rain?
Who screams out rage
from the deep dispells within?
Who is the artist
who paints out my life.
Who is the artist
who painted the small little girls pain?
Lost in her own world,
small and afarid.
Unsure of the world that lay before her.
oh kno i get the whole "love apart..." thing but like hmm just like when sentence after sentence is like that it kinda gets hard to read...when its all...seperate...from each other do u get wat i mean?
e.g. "just whisper.....my name'
I just think its way more effective when u just say it straight out, it kinda makes it more bold?
"just whisper my name" i just think sounds kinda better? more needy and straight-forward
But it's supposed to be a pause,
oh what the hell, who cares. [img]http://s2.images.proboards.com/tongue.gif" alt=":P" border="0"/>
lol ok ok its ur poem if u think it suits what u wanna say then no problemo [img]http://s2.images.proboards.com/tongue.gif" alt=":P" border="0"/> Just giving my opinion [img]http://s2.images.proboards.com/smiley.gif" alt=":)" border="0"/>
It's fine, Ry, It's fine.
I like opinions. [img]http://s2.images.proboards.com/grin.gif" alt=";D" border="0"/>
yes, indeedy [img]http://s2.images.proboards.com/smiley.gif" alt=":)" border="0"/> they smell like cheese [img]http://s2.images.proboards.com/tongue.gif" alt=":P" border="0"/>
